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Neferti

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This here is my Neferti in her clothes from the past.

She is the lil sister from the pharaoh Atem(u) from YuGiOh! .

Her boyfriend in the presence is Marik Ishtar.

She is called Neferti in the past but Teti in the presence.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This pic adn this OC look cute. ^^

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletwhite:" title="Bullet; White"/> Positives:
- The eyes detail is so good.
- Her outfit looks so original.
- The pic is mainly clean.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> Negatives:
- Her head anatomy is okay, but I don't really like her body anatomy.
- It looks like her legs are diverging.
- Her shoulders are a little bit too wide, so is her breast.
- You could have added some shadings, and a background would have looked fine.
-Her hair's fringe is a bit weird, but only a little bit ^^

I hope I wasn't too strict <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>
If I was forgive me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/>
I wish you to improve with your art!!!
=LenaDashii